Roast My New Creation(itsrilo.com)
itsrilo.com
Roast My New Creation
https://itsrilo.com
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I’ve created a curious creature called Rilo who ends up in London, and I've hit the stage where feedback from friends and family is useless. Everyone says it's great. I don't need great, I need proper feedback, and I'm told this is the place for honestly.
The preview is at www.itsrilo.com. Password: wobble
Simply navigate your way around and leave and feedback you can to help us with our next steps.
"My four-year-old lost interest in ten seconds" is worth way more to me than a hundred compliments so please fire away.
The preview is at www.itsrilo.com. Password: wobble
Simply navigate your way around and leave and feedback you can to help us with our next steps.
"My four-year-old lost interest in ten seconds" is worth way more to me than a hundred compliments so please fire away.
My daughter is sleeping now, will test tomorrow.
Anyway, is it hand draw or AI?
Why the password?
Anyway, is it hand draw or AI?
Why the password?
I took a look at "Moon Story". Some suggestions:
* It would be nice to be able to go forward and backwards in the full screen.
* The font is too thick and there is too little space between letters. It's difficult to read for children. (Also, it's getting popular to teach children only all-caps, so you may want to add an all-caps version.)
* It would be nice to be able to go forward and backwards in the full screen.
* The font is too thick and there is too little space between letters. It's difficult to read for children. (Also, it's getting popular to teach children only all-caps, so you may want to add an all-caps version.)
IF your audience is 5-year olds, maybe Hacker News isn't the best place to get beta testers?
Nit-pick: the carousel stops are weird on my phone.
Hope this is what you were looking for.