I can't say I expect a book about writing computer code to be Hemingway. What's the point of this criticism? The writing is clear, concise, and does exactly what it's intended to do.
Additionally, your last line has the worst punctuation of all time.
I would live in something like this happily, but for one thing: I have three large dogs. Without a yard, it's a lot of work, and I'd hate to think I couldn't keep a few dogs around.
Now that the suburbs people want to move to the city with all of their square footage, they're destroying my 100 year old neighborhood, bulldozing Victorian and Craftsman homes to build zero lot-line homes in their places.
It makes me want to throw up. Every time the council pushes for a Historic Overlay, it turns into a revolt with Tea Party style propaganda.
I think I'll do so now for exactly this reason.