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So, um, you seem like a nice guy? But gosh, your marketing skills may need a little bit of work.
So if I can tell correctly, you are reselling hosting services from (as you say in your comments) cheap providers. Then maybe you are having a page layout designer the client can access? This is an okay idea - there are many. But your front page (heyhomepage.com) has a picture of a woman and a caption "so easy anyone can do it". This is offensive. You say it is free but at the bottom it says it is 17 euro per month. The page is so simple, no one will want to make a page like that! Your information on there lists basic reasons someone might want a webpage, but they already know that! May I suggest... rethinking the idea completely? Are you a hosting provider? Are you designing web design software? You might do better as an affiliate reseller. Also, RSS is not Really Social Sites, it is Really Simple Syndication.
I know this is not the feedback you wanted, but I guess its better than being ignored.
Best of luck with the next idea!
I would suggest that if they can offer that as a discount, it may well reflect what cut they are taking from the restaurants sales. So not a 'loss', merely a failure to reap a profit on that sale.
I would further suggest that the sale price of the product is increased by a said amount.
Or we could look it up... (its 30%) To do this I asked Bing "how much does it cost restaurants on uber eats"
"According to ... International NGO Bullying Without Borders ... the country with the most cases of bullying is Mexico, with 7 out of 10 children and adolescents. In the USA, the numbers are 6 out of 10, followed by China"
Well, I did read this article that said that school attendance increased youth suicide incidents between 12-18 percent. I wonder where I could find that... Oh wait, that's the thread we are talking about.
Yes Bob, lack of adequate staffing at schools is probably the single biggest contributing factor for student alienation.
Infact, social media (which has a lot to do with cameras and technology) is often a factor in alienation and bullying.
So I agree, cameras everywhere is not a viable solution. After all, someone would need to view and review those videos! And then what? Punish the bullies, leading them deeper into conflict with the school system?
Robin Hood is pretty well recieved in the broader west, and Ned Kelly is an Australian icon. I think the theme is pretty universal. For Christmas tradition the west has Scrooge which reveals the inherent disconnect between Christmas and wealth.
Hesse "Steppenwolf", and if you like it "The Glass Bead Game"
Stendahl "The Red and the Black"
and Bulgakov "The Master and Margarita"
Once you've read them come back for more! And if I may note, literature is a world thing that opens up new domains. No way to limit it to one place. However in your stated context, how about
So, um, you seem like a nice guy? But gosh, your marketing skills may need a little bit of work.
So if I can tell correctly, you are reselling hosting services from (as you say in your comments) cheap providers. Then maybe you are having a page layout designer the client can access? This is an okay idea - there are many. But your front page (heyhomepage.com) has a picture of a woman and a caption "so easy anyone can do it". This is offensive. You say it is free but at the bottom it says it is 17 euro per month. The page is so simple, no one will want to make a page like that! Your information on there lists basic reasons someone might want a webpage, but they already know that! May I suggest... rethinking the idea completely? Are you a hosting provider? Are you designing web design software? You might do better as an affiliate reseller. Also, RSS is not Really Social Sites, it is Really Simple Syndication.
I know this is not the feedback you wanted, but I guess its better than being ignored. Best of luck with the next idea!