We Always Leave Things Unfinished(bigreaderbadgrades.substack.com)

54 pointsby bryanrasmussen11 dagen geleden2 comments

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> Our elbows graze and his windbreaker says “vwip,” “vwop,” the walk feeling almost like a jog until finally he slows, we’re getting ready to jaywalk

The little onomatopoeia feels quite forced and out of place here -- totally the wrong note. FWIW, AI really likes writing that kind of thing, and I wonder to what degree that's influencing actual writers.

bobbytheblkbear8 dagen geleden

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