Tell HN: My group just finished our short animation. Thoughts?(youtube.com)
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Tell HN: My group just finished our short animation. Thoughts?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kCHivuaQhQY
Completed for CNM190 at UC Berkeley.
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I think that the bit where the two characters simultaneously shot the rose should have held the anticipation a little longer, and maybe exaggerated the beams more.
I also felt that the angel's pose was a bit stiff when he was shaking his head. And given the way that the characters were positioned beside the rose, the explosion should have sent them flying sideways, instead of into the camera (though I realize that you needed to show them together in the following shot).
Sorry to be so nitpicky, but this was for a class, right?
I also felt that the angel's pose was a bit stiff when he was shaking his head. And given the way that the characters were positioned beside the rose, the explosion should have sent them flying sideways, instead of into the camera (though I realize that you needed to show them together in the following shot).
Sorry to be so nitpicky, but this was for a class, right?