tkam · HackerTrans

4 lata temudiscuss

Nice! One problem: There's digital clipping. I suspect that the four samples are normalized individually, and when playing at the same time the transients add up to over 0dB. On quality headphones (beyerdynamic dt770 for me) it is quite audible. It happens with the piano and the synth sample, but is more audible with the piano sample.

tkam

4 lata temudiscuss

> I was a terrible writer growing up.

And why should I care? Maybe answer that question earlier. At least give me a hint, to keep me engaged. The whole first five+ paragraphs are way too self-centered for a piece that wants to sell something to me.

The way it is written now, you lost me right at the beginning. And I guess I'm not alone in that. If you want more people to give you their email, you have to do better than that.

tkam

5 lat temudiscuss

Related to this: Since when I was young, maybe around six or so, on nights before special days I looked forward to a lot (like my birthday), I was desperate and agonized over the realization that my current self (what you call "train of thought") would end once I fell asleep, so this current longing that I had would never actually be fulfilled. This made me really sad, and it felt like my current "self" would die and get replaced the next morning by a somehow related "self", that was in it's essential emotional state very new and in that regard definitely separate. I continued to have this feeling from time to time (maybe 2-3 times per year, less later on) until well into my twenties, when it somehow receded. I have not talked about this often, but when I did, I never found anybody that could relate.

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