Had a lot of feedback about the copy so I've made a bunch of changes. Keeping in mind "you" and "developers" etc has really helped me better understand the goals of the copy so thank you!
Hi all,
I've written my first ever blog post and would love to get some feedback on how I can improve it along with how I can make future posts better.
The post is about Wyckoff accumulation schematics in trading (not the most interesting topic to most :P).
Any and all feedback is much appreciated, thanks!
Your comment, like speech in general I admit, doesn't tell the whole truth.
"Again, the only 'accommodation' that is asked is to just let them live."
This isn't true as they are asking that comedians to not make jokes about them. Dave Chapelle nor any comedian that I know of go around saying trans people should not be allowed to live. Or have I missed something?
You minimise it as "being in a book". The book is: "a publication by the American Psychiatric Association for the classification of mental disorders". Are you part of the psychiatric field?
you may believe that your positions are worth more than their current price but the reality is that they aren't otherwise they would be selling at the higher price. the price of an asset is its true value
your comment about the price being $70 a year ago seems off to me. that's not the value now so why should it be seen as such? if you were buying a house worth $400,000 and made an offer of $540,000 but were told no, this house was worth $700,000 a year ago the value of this fictional house now is still $400,000
You could always suggest the book that the quote is from for purchase. Once you have built a user base it could be worth reaching out to book shops for some form of partnership (or for them to buy the app outright).
I think you already know the answer. Just build things that fix problems you have. If there is a market for it they will find your solution, if not, you will have a solution to your product.
If you are building something to make money, you most likely wont make money and it sucks for your mentality. If you build something you enjoy, you have fun, learn something and then if it makes money that's a bonus.
That would be cool. Personally if I ever want a quote I want a motivational one so that I can stop goofing around and do some work. Maybe something that works out what sort of quotes I do / don't like would be a cool feature
Wasn't this known as soon as they announced it? Pornhub had to delete a huge chunk of their content because banks weren't happy with it and stared to withhold payments
I happily admit I have only read the title here but you cannot be a multi-million $$$ startup unless you use AI somewhere in your stack. Change my mind