It is the best stuff I have read in a while actually, I really like dialogue heavy writing. Also the AI disclaimer was quite nice and there was an actual reference :)
In my experience Kimi could be a bit brutal. It was appreciated but then as soon as I point out an error it goes to a sycophantic state, so maybe be careful with that.
Hey, just a little thing: I am pretty sure that "Noel" would be pronounced exactly the same way as "Noël".
Also for the é,è,ê, prononciations vary wildly by regions (in Belgium they are different, "ê" is like "è" but longer) but in the South of France, most people I have met do not hear the difference (but sometimes pronounce it, which always surprise me).
Thanks for the good work