Sure! The biggest issue is the number of comma splices, which make many of your sentences feel jumbled and disjointed. Aside from that are many more innocent mistakes: “at least” shouldn’t be hyphenated, “ancient” in “ancient Egypt” shouldn’t be capitalized, “one last advice” should be something like “one last piece of advice,” etc. And it could use a good proofing for stuff like “prefect” instead of “perfect” or “make to sense” instead of “make no sense.”
But again, I really dig where you went with the article. I think you make a lot of good points and that your advice to learn by writing is great stuff. It could just use some polish.
But again, I really dig where you went with the article. I think you make a lot of good points and that your advice to learn by writing is great stuff. It could just use some polish.